Hug In Spring

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　　Dear friend,    Today I will introduce a cute girl to you.She has a fair-sounding name——Spring.    Ms.Sping is very beautiful that like an angle.It's unbelievable that her dresses are so colorful that I can't even believe my eyes.There are many flowers on her dresses,and we can also see grass,trees,butterflies and so on.Everyone who knew her all loves her dresses.She is like a princess in the storybook.    Ms.Spring is also a kind girl.She loves everyone and shows all of her beauty to us.She is popular because of her friendly.She wants to keep a good relationship with other people.She seems to understand a magic that is able to make us forget the sadness in life.We can feel better when we stay with her.    All in all,she is the best girl who I have known.However,she will leave us in June.I'm going to miss her all year round after she leaves.    Do you start to love Spring after reading this letter?Then,hug in Spring and cherish Spring——the greatest time in a year!                      Yours,                      Wendy

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Dear friend,   
  Today I want to introduce a friend to you. She has a wonderful name-Spring. She is very beautiful, like an angle. She has got a colorful dress. There are many flowers on her dress, and we can also see green grass, trees, butterflies on it. Everyone loves her dress. She looks like a princess. She is also a kind girl. She loves everyone and shows all her beauty to us. She is friendly. She wants to have a good relationship with everyone. She seems to have a magic that can make everyone forget the sadness in life. We feel happy when we stay with her.  All in all, she is the best person I have known. However, she leaves us in June every year. I'm going to miss her all year round. Do you start to love her after reading this letter? Then, enjoy yourself with her and cherish her—the greatest time in a year!                     
Yours,                     
Wendy 

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