2024年9月30日 星期一 下午 12:20
2017年高考全国2卷英语作文范文及赏析一
Dear Henry
I'm Li Hua, the leader of the paper-cutting club in our school. Last time you told me you looked forward to learning more about traditional Chinese culture. Now I'm glad to tell you there will be a Chinese paper-cutting exhibition held by our school. I sincerely hope you can set aside some time for the art feast.
The exhibition, the theme of which is "beauty of China", will take place in the school hall from 2 to 5 on the afternoon of June 21. Not only will our club's works be displayed, but we also have a valuable set of paper-cutting created by a famous artist of this field. Besides, there will be a lot of useful and interesting activities, from which you can have a clearer picture of Chinese culture.
I would appreciate it if you accept my invitation. I'm sure it can leave a wonderful impression on you! I'm looking forward to your reply.
Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hua
1. 逻辑性较好,层次分明,连贯恰当;
2. 运用词块、句型丰富;
3. 个别用词需要改进比如说leader, leave a wonderful impression不符英语表达习惯;
4. 第一段不够简洁。
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